IALT Use well chosen verbs and replace the boring verbs and uses interesting verbs.
A lion stalking its prey.
His claws gripped onto the ground. With his eyes following its every move. He slowly crawled closer to his prey. Drooling by just seeing its hypnotizing stripes.
Hi Bex, I'm not sure what other verbs you could have used. I really enjoyed reading your story. I'm guessing the prey is a hopeless zebra. - Nicole. S Room 13
Hi Bex, I'm not sure what other verbs you could have used. I really enjoyed reading your story. I'm guessing the prey is a hopeless zebra.
ReplyDelete- Nicole. S Room 13